E - book writting

Ok--- Today´s ebook learning.

• The boys went into to woods
• The two boys went into to the lush, green wood and listen to the wind blowing through the leaves
• The two boys went into to the dark forest and the young one fell and hurt his knee

So choice of words and context has to be meaningfull....AND in fictional text one can overload the sensory imagery(?) and in historic text one has to be carefull. Unless there is pictures or eyewitness account to support your claim.


The Bell in english

http://www.andersen.sdu.dk/vaerk/hersholt/TheBell.html